PIF: I love art

by Sie chan
(Vietnam)

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when i was a little girl, i dreamed about becoming an artist. I love art, i love comic, n manga...n something like that. I just know that my life is so happy with colours of painting.

But i wasn't learn to become an artist. Now I'm in Hanoi architecture university. I'll become an architect. I still draw everyday.And although i'm not an artist, i still happy about it. i think art, architect are wonderful.

I must learn harder to become a famous architect like Frank L.Wright or like Zaha Hadid

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Jun 15, 2009

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by: Thuy

In my opinion, your writing has several mistakes. I'll try to correct them...(I put my suggestions in brackets)
When I was a little girl, I dreamed about (of) becoming an artist. I love art, I love comics, manga...and things like that. I just know that my life (would be) is a painting so happy with colours (colour).

But I wasn't learn (had not taken any art courses)to become an artist. Now I'm in Hanoi Architecture University. I'll become an architect. I still draw everyday. Although I'm not an artist, I'm still happy about it. I think art and architecture are wonderful.

I must ~~learn~~ study harder to become a famous architect like Frank L.Wright or like Zaha Hadid.

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