Nightmare
by Suma
(Banglore, India)
Excuse me sir, I’ve robbed by someone. i was walking through this street, somebody came and pull my handbag. I was try to stop him. He pulled the bag and my shirt was torn. My arm was injured. The man looks like his mid 40's with long hair.
Suma!!! Be careful! In your statement above you just told me that you robbed someone; that you stole something from someone else. (The "by" is correct but you need "been" as well). Here is what you meant to say:
Excuse me sir,
I’ve been robbed by someone.
I was walking
through down this street and somebody came and
pull took my handbag. I was try
ing to stop him,
when he pulled the bag and my shirt
was torn tore (ripped). My arm was injured
too. The man looks like
he was in his mid 40's with long hair.
Good work Suma...just be careful with that first line. "I've been robbed!" - Diana
Still looking? Search the site for exactly what you need using the site search box below.
Happy exploring!
Enjoy this page? Please pay it forward. Here's how...
Would you prefer to share this page with others by linking to it?
- Click on the HTML link code below.
- Copy and paste it, adding a note of your own, into your blog, a Web page, forums, a blog comment,
your Facebook account, or anywhere that someone would find this page valuable.
Discover these Amazing ESL Materials!