An Unhappy Accident

by Raluca Daniela
(Bucharest, Romania)

Please mr. policeman officer, pleasehelp me! I must report a robbery! I was walking on the Avenue 15th street no 15 when I saw I nice red dress in the showcase of the Steilmann shop.

Obviously Abviously I stopped. You know that I am a huge fan of shopping fan and I just cannot pass through without looking or sometimes even buying. Actually, I had bought an very expensive Zara dress from Zara just fifteen minutes before that this unfortunate accident happend.

Anyway, As I was saying, I was admiring the dresses in that Steilmann dress and when suddenly I felt a someone grasp on my arm. As you can imagine, I got became very confused and scared in at the same time. I turned away quickly and I got shocked was stunned for 2 seconds: a short man, with a dubious look, was actually grabbing my bag! Can you imagine? He was robbing stealing my bag with my precious-just-bought Zara dress from Zara!

Ohh my God, I thought I would faint. But in the next second I started beating him hardly with the magazine that I was holding in my other hand. I was so scared and frightened, because he had strongly grabbed my hand with so much force and had started rudely ripping my shirt. I can still feel my hand aching me. My hand still hurts!

Can you please help me? I want my bag back. With that fancy dress I had in it. I also lost my identity card ana my wallet too. Please, I leave live near the center, on the at number 12, Future str. no 12. I leave you Here is my entire address and when you find that horrible thief, could you could call me immediately on at this number? Catch that man, he is a real danger on our streets!
Thank you

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Raluca!!! Excellent work!

You had me smiling the whole time. Not because the woman had been robbed but by how creative and descriptive your assignment is. I LOVE IT! You really set an example for everyone else here. I changed a couple things (word placement, spelling and a bit of grammar) BUT in general I must congratulate you. What a great job!

Also, THANK YOU for submitting the picture too. It makes your assignment very visually pleasing. I encourage everyone to include a picture with your assignments. :)
Keep you the great work Raluca.
-Diana :)